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3 Responses to A Poem about Life

1. lavanya...... says:

   January 18, 2010 at 5:26 am

   hey…. u highlighted d fact of lyf in juz 4lines very greatly, it would hav been better if there were some more lines……….
2. vindhya says:

   January 18, 2010 at 7:30 am

   hey sandy….
   your poem is extraordinary.
   the important thing is that you have made ppl to grasp a great crux from just four sentences.
   but as a reader,i prefer you to write poems wid atleast 10 lines!next time
   have a gr8 day….
3. anusha says:

   January 19, 2010 at 12:05 pm

   hey super sandy!!!! 4lines = life,,, wow great…